tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35631991.post1133245215550156145..comments2023-10-03T10:10:41.314-07:00Comments on The Blue Elephant: Publication of the verse "Father"The Blue Elephanthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11514900714717443096noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35631991.post-3132049705742873102011-01-14T02:40:49.141-08:002011-01-14T02:40:49.141-08:00Congratulations, Jim, for a wonderful poem. It is ...Congratulations, Jim, for a wonderful poem. It is quite gripping throughout and the ending, "a patch of ice on dark ground, melting /until there is only mud, stars, and memory", really brings it home.Lorenzo — Alchemist's Pillowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07522265816460154722noreply@blogger.com